Feedback

After evaluating other class mates videos, they did some feedback on my rough cut video. They were honest, which is what I needed, however the majority thought that:

• Scenes are to dark in area's were I have filmed outside, some parts were not even visible. 

• Cut down some of the walking, there was not much purpose behind where he was going.

• The Fox scenes were not clear enough on the purpose of why it was in the video. 
• Consider new locations as using the house was unrealistic and unprofessional.

• Cut down on the drinking scenes, far too unrealistic, and was dragged out too long in the video.

The Spider-diagram I made above, were improvements and changes I created form looking through the feedback. I came to many conclusions where I could improve areas.