To get some feedback on my Final Cut of my video the whole of the class got together and we sat and watched everyone's video's where we reviewed and commented good and bad points also where areas could be improved.
I managed to get some feedback from this activity myself, I ended up with 18 pieces of feedback; some more detailed than others, but helpful none the less.
What was good about my video:
- Good use of "MTV" logo
- the video "flows"
- Cuts to the beat
- Narrative was clear and consistent
- Shots were complimented by transitions
- Actor is well presented
- Lyrics are linked with actions, especially at "If I close my eyes"
- Good voyeurism
- Transitions are used appropriately
- Narrative works well with the lyrics
- Complimentary mise en scene with the location
- Range of different shots used
- Effective camera angles
- Lighting was good due to contrast of the dark.
- Good camera movement
- Actor/ actress showed enthusiasm
- Ending pieced the video together well
Areas of improvement:
- Some areas were dark in places- this was mentioned on more than one occasion
- Some camera movement was a bit unsteady at times
- More eye contact was needed
- Narrative was slightly confusing until the end
- A bit too much walking
- The actor could maybe sing some lyrics
- Some shots slightly long
From looking at the reviews of the feedback I had been given, overall, I was very pleased! The feedback I received was constructive and showed me areas which I could improve on and what worked well in the video. I think the good outweighs the bad here so I am not too worried about making any drastic changes to the video.
Changing my idea appeared to be a good move, as compared to my Rough Cut the reviews have improved and shown that with a bit of more time, planning and effort the outcome is greater.
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